Comments on StageFive

# 1 Comment. # Chaz, your game is obfuscated by your color text. You might want that, but it's not a good idea. You don't need 12 pages for the rules to your game; you can probably describe them in one or two. If you are going to persist with this theme-heavy structure, you need a game that's equally ambitious -- Advanced Squad Leader leaps to mind -- but I can't recommend that for your first outing in game design. Also, rules are meant to convey to the reader how to play. Please organize them, write them in plain English, and enough with the ALL CAPS TEXT, okay? Thanks and good luck.

-- RonHaleEvans 2018-05-06 05:41 UTC

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